This is the first review I have ever written, despite being a long time lurker in this website, only to express how saddening this story has become. I fully believe that it has the potential to be a very high quality story on this site. In summary, though the story has not yet progressed very far I am very excited to see where the author plans on taking this story into the future. This is the story of a chicken on it's path of cultivation and certainly nothing else, though it disguises itself well. Jin Rou is merely the narrator and historian of Big D's life and is indubitably not the protagonist in the face of Big D's might.ĭon't be fooled by the story description. The protagonist of the story draws you in, wanting to know more despite his simple and unassuming life. The romance is well done too - it's entirely believable in how it develops, I feel. There are comedic parts as well that are all well above par, ranging from quippy one-liners to drawn out comedic scenes, such as one where he meets a love interest while playing with some kids from a nearby village. There's no dialogue that I've seen yet that felt stilted or out of place. The characters all feel natural and well-written. Though it is clearly not the focus of the story the few fight scenes are nevertheless well done with striking imagery and combat sequences flowing naturally. It's a very simple slice of life with the tale of the farm being expanded and laboured upon, with fields of crops sown and animals raised. The atmosphere of this story is intentionally light and cheery, given the premise of the story in the first place. Volume 4 Chapter 1: Breakout, into the World Interlude: The Special Inspector+Release Day+AMAīOC Sidestory: The Man Who Would Be Called Hong Xian.īOC Sidestory: The Man Who Would Be Called Hong Xian part 2īOC Sidestory: The Man Who Would Be Called Hong Xian part 3 Interlude: Born of the Heavens Child of the Earth V3c53.3: The Return of Senior Brother part 3 V3c53.2: The Return of Senior Brother part 2 V3 c49.3: The Heavens and the Earth part 3 V3c34: Ring in the New Year Final: Auld Lang Syne
V3c34: Ring in the New Year Part 3: The Old Men V3c34: Ring in the New Year Part 2: High Above the Clouds
V3c34: Ring in the New Year Part 1: The Boys V3 c28: Not Just One Pillar Holds the Sky V3 C 25.4: The Cave and the Crystal part 4
V3 c25.3: The Cave and the Crystal Part 3 V3 c25.2: The Cave and the Crystal Part 2
More pictures, original concept for Gramps V2 c 88: The Old Men Lost in the Mountain V2c64: The Smaller Blade of Grass part 1. Chapter 1: He Bravely Turned His Tail and Fled
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